Weather Prf
Weather Prf
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Can you please prf read this for me
I came to Canada from 9 years ago to take the Canadian citizen ship card and we stayed 4 years , then we went to Sudan. After sitting 5 years in Sudan we returned to Canada again. This is my 4th year in Canada after coming from Sudan. I feel that Canada is better than Sudan with its weather and everything else.
"I came to Canada from 9 years ago", came from where? Also numbers should be spelled out not written in numerical form.
"to take the Canadian citizen ship card" What is the citizenship(one word not two) card? You need to make that clearer. Also why did you go to Canada for citizenship?
"we stayed 4 years, then we went to Sudan." Again write out the number. Why did you go to Sudan?
"After sitting 5 years in Sudan we returned to Canada again." Were you living in Sudan? Why did you return to Canada?
"This is my 4th year in Canada after coming from Sudan." Always write out numbers, the only exception is dates and time. Never write things like 1st or 4th, etc. Write them out. First, second, etc. The sentence structure is a little awkward too. "This is my fourth..." I would suggest something like "I've been back in Canada for four years now" or "This is my fourth year back." You've already established that you're in Canada in the previous sentence as well as the fact the returned to Canada from Sudan, so there's no reason to repeat the information.
"I feel that Canada is better than Sudan with its weather and everything else"
The structure is again awkward and the sentence doesn't really tell the reader again.
"I like Canada better than Sudan because of its weather." Explain to us the difference between the weather in Sudan and Canada. Why do you like it better. "And everything else" is really vague and doesn't tell us anything. List and explain your reasons. Don't be afraid to use more than one sentence if you have to.
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